Saturday, April 17, 2010

Kuch lines wing ki junta ke naam!

khul gayi hai purani diary,
aa gayi hai yaad kuch bhooli shayri,

ho gaye peele sabhi paane,
magar gandh ab tak suhani aaye ri

phool sookhey keh rhe, rotey hue,
yaad na dil se purani jaye ri,

jo banaya tha kabhi, apno ke liye,
dil wahi bhoola tarana gaye ri,

aankh se jaise samandar beh chala,
tan tadap ke keh rha haay ri,

khul gayi hai purani diary,
aa gayi hai yaad kuch bhooli shayri!
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8 comments:

  1. UnknownApril 17, 2010 at 5:37 PM

    masttttt.... chapu rachana hai guru... :)
    keep it up :atb

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  2. MrityunjayaApril 17, 2010 at 5:45 PM

    bahut jaldi likh di ye kavita :P
    agar 10 saal baad likhte to ye poem mere itihaas ke record mein chali jaati :)

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  3. BlackravenApril 17, 2010 at 5:56 PM

    Diary to sahi hai kaafi...
    kis umra me likhni shuru ki thi ?
    saaley class 8th me hi likhney lagey they ye
    jo ab panney piley ho gaye..kyun ??

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  4. UnknownApril 17, 2010 at 8:11 PM

    lovely lines...

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  5. UnknownApril 17, 2010 at 9:09 PM

    One of the best composition.......classic one...bhaut sahi hai bhai.....tumse aise hi rachana ki expectation thi..chaape raho :))........

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  6. Amit SinghalApril 17, 2010 at 9:51 PM

    chaap rahe ho guru !!!

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  7. abhkApril 18, 2010 at 3:39 PM

    mast likha hai ranjanwa..lagta hai ab control nahi ho raha tumse :) ..ek poem haasil ke naam bhi likh do..

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  8. UnknownApril 28, 2010 at 12:45 AM

    very nicely written.....

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